Tag: #POV

Show, Don’t Tell: Using Deep POV to Hook Your Reader

We’ve all heard the “show, don’t tell” admonition. But what exactly does it mean? And if you’ve already said your protagonist was afraid because she heard a scary noise under…

By jaywhistler August 30, 2021 Off

First-Person POV vs. Third-Person POV: Which Should You Use for a Middle-Grade or Young Adult Story?

Writing Advice

In general, which POV is right for middle-grade novels and which is right for young-adult novels?

By jaywhistler August 9, 2020 Off

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